Sunday, July 3, 2011

Reader Contest: Test Your Gag Reflex


Okay, campers, here’s how it works. Read this product description from Amazon books and note the point at which you begin to feel queasy. Report back in the comments. If anyone makes it all the way through with appetite intact, I’ll reveal the name of the author whose work is described.

P.S. On the other hand, let me know if this sounds like something you would buy. If the market wants syrupy “meditations” on the senses I’ll change course immediately.
This title contains inspiring meditations through the author’s rich store of memories. In these elegant, short essays, revered nature writer [Name Withheld], attempts to marry a Romantic’s view of the natural world with that of the meticulous observations of the scientist. By Romanticism he refers to the view that nature isn’t a machine to be dissected, but a community of which we, the observers, are inextricably part. And that our feelings about that community are a perfectly proper subject for reflection, because they shape our relationship with it. Scientists eshew [sic] such a subjective response, wanting to witness the natural world exactly, whatever feelings subsequently follow. Our feelings are an extension of our senses - sight, taste, smell, touch and sound - and here, in a sextet of inspiring meditations, [Name Withheld] explores each sensory response in what it means to interact with nature. From birdsong to poetry, from Petri-dish to microscope, this is a joyful union of meandering thoughts and intimate memories.

P.P.S. See comments for the results.

14 comments:

JoanElaine said...

My stomach heaved at the first mention of "community", so I'm out.

Please tell me this is not a Richard Mabey book. I like his work.

I have a couple of suspects in mind, so I'll be waiting patiently for the reveal...

Avery Gilbert said...

JoanElaine:

Stay tuned.

I too choked on "community." Is the author an observer of it, or inextricably part of it? Gack.

carmencanada /Grain de Musc said...

Community is also where the gagging reflex kicked in. But I did start feeling queasy at "inspiring"...

Fernando said...

My gag reflex kicks in at "revered nature writer". The book sounds frightfully bad.

Olfacta said...

"Revered nature writer," gaaack!

Avery Gilbert said...

carmencanada /Grain de Musc:

Queasy at the first adjective: what refined sensibilities you have, Madame!

Avery Gilbert said...

Fernando:

You don't care for overly worshipful characterizations of authors, eh?

It is weird phrasing. "The Reverend Nature Writer will marry Miss Romantic and Mr. Scientist today in an inspiring meditation at the Church of the Inextricable Community on Petri Avenue."

Avery Gilbert said...

Olfacta:

You and Fernando can start a club.

With training, you might be able to make it all the way through "meticulous."

Avery Gilbert said...

Time’s up!

Judging by the entries, FirstNerve readers have an admirably low threshold for quease-inducing promotional copy. Kudos to JoanElaine at RedolentOfSpices for nailing the Amazon product description as a blurb for British nature writer Richard Mabey, specifically his new collection of essays. She now has to reconcile her appreciation of his work with this over-the-top gush. If there’s a “Get Well Soon” card for cognitive dissonance headaches, I’ll send her one.

Guess I don’t have to re-tune the FirstNerve Automatic Writing Machine to start churning out inspired, joyful, yet meticulous reflections on Nature.

Whew!

Avery Gilbert said...

BTW here's what set me off like a 74-Shot Twinkling Barrage With Whistle: an excerpt from Mabey's smell essay published in the Financial Times.

You can take or leave the rhapsodical Nature Writing, but this sentence is complete horseshit:

"The reason we know so much about scents that we cannot smell is thanks to an instrument invented by James Lovelock in the 1960s, which detects minute traces of chemicals."

+ Q Perfume Blog said...

The book hive....stingy...lesson number one - not all independent publishers know their English...

Not only I will not buy this book, but I can pretty much state that I rather run naked as nature brought me to the world, in any community, than read this book.

English people...funny funny

Avery Gilbert said...

+Q Perfume Blog:

You are being very hard on the English. Don't forget they can provide excellent entertainment value in their own way. Imagine an on-stage discussion between Roja Dove and Richard Mabey.

So don't buy the book, and please do let us know when you plan to run naked through the community because, you know, we're like all inextricably linked and we will totally be there for you!

+ Q Perfume Blog said...

:-) LOL!

JoanElaine said...

As the Brits say "Bloody Hell!"

I walked right into that one, didn't I?

I enjoyed his Nature Cure and I've been wanting to read his book on Gilbert White for some time...

Well, I can always go back to Richard Adams...